So the title is a tad odd - having the streamers and confetti connected to the top of the letters resembles too closely to blood drippings you see in some fonts. I would make the confetti a bit larger and spread out. I would change the font to the terminal typeface ([link](typeface) [link] (right side)) Also, species seems more appropriate than 'kind' You may want to consider having pinkie centered, with the cutie mark off to the right and the colors below or to the right as well. The setup you have now has the advantage of looking more like a file, but it isn't quite as aesthetic.
Supongo yo que es un wallpaper, te quedo bastante bien, pero no lo pondria de fondo, es que si te soy sinsero, no me gusto mucho, pero mas parece ficha tecnica, supongo que estara bien.
Aaaah, con razon, porque no creeria que te quedaran asi, como ya he visto tus anteriores trabajos, de todas maneras si es asi, te quedo bastante bien.....
So the title is a tad odd - having the streamers and confetti connected to the top of the letters resembles too closely to blood drippings you see in some fonts. I would make the confetti a bit larger and spread out.
I would change the font to the terminal typeface ([link](typeface) [link] (right side)) Also, species seems more appropriate than 'kind'
You may want to consider having pinkie centered, with the cutie mark off to the right and the colors below or to the right as well. The setup you have now has the advantage of looking more like a file, but it isn't quite as aesthetic.
I look forward to more of your deviations!
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