Derpy Hooves from the TV show My little pony magic is Friendship At First he started off as a girl but had her voice changed later on in the series. Vision and Impact is 5 since this is kinda of a cute picture to look at a Cute Chibi girl eating a Muffin with a smile around her cheek X3. Originailty is 3 since most My little pony art revolves around Women of any type but so far i have'nt found a duplicate of this picture so it might be the real deal. In Conclusion the artwork looks adorable thanks for making it Fellow Deviant.
Humor put aside, I think that this picture of anthropomorphic Derpy Hooves os perfect.. I give you a perfect 5 stars for vision because as an Anime fan, I can say that I have seen plenty of anime shows and read mangas. Here, Derpy looks better than even Sebastian Michaelis, and that truly is saying something.
Now, with the originality, I gave you a 4.5. Many My Little Pony fans are into anthropomorphisizing ponies. Besides that, Derpy Hooves is the most popular background character, so her fanart fills deviantART. It's partially original, though.
Your technique proves worthy of 5 stars. I have tried, on ocassion, to draw anime in Microsoft Paint. I only got to the eyes. You have drawn this picture way better than many others I've seen on deviantART.
Impact gets 5 stars for awesomeness. This is truly worthy of a watch.